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You attended a workshop at a local community center, but the content was outdated, the facilities were inadequate, and the instructor was unprepared. Write an email to the workshop coordinator.


  • • Describe the issues with the workshop content
  • • Explain the problems with the facilities
  • • Mention the instructor’s lack of preparation
  • • State how you would like the coordinator to address these concerns
Time remaining: 27 minutes 0 seconds

*Sample response given below:

Words: 0

Sample Answer
Important Keywords:
Feedback
Disappointing workshop
Outdated content
Current trends
Lack of value
Inadequate facilities
Overcrowded room
Uncomfortable seating
Poor audiovisual equipment
Unprepared instructor
Unfamiliar with material
Frustration
Diminished effectiveness
Review and update
Improve facilities
Follow-up session
Sample Answer:

Dear Workshop Coordinator, I am writing to express my disappointment with the recent workshop I attended at the community center. The content presented was outdated and did not reflect current trends or practices in the subject matter. This made the session less valuable than I had anticipated, as I was hoping to gain up-to-date knowledge and skills. Additionally, the facilities provided for the workshop were inadequate. The room was overcrowded, the seating was uncomfortable, and the audiovisual equipment was either malfunctioning or of poor quality, making it difficult to follow along with the presentations. Furthermore, it was evident that the instructor was unprepared. They struggled to answer basic questions and seemed unfamiliar with the material they were supposed to be teaching. This lack of preparation was frustrating and diminished the overall effectiveness of the workshop. I suggest that you review and update the workshop content, improve the facilities, and ensure that instructors are well-prepared and knowledgeable. I would appreciate it if you could offer a follow-up session with revised content and better facilities to make up for this disappointing experience. Thank you for considering my feedback. Sincerely, [Your Name]

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